I'm not sure it's a complete sentence...but I'm calling it done for now. Or at least until I get more feedback from Jane. I wonder if a poet...or a writer takes almost a week to write one sentence.
I wanted my sentence to shout JOY....and I think it does.
I declare it a sentence. It is not a fragment or a run-on. And it looks wonderfully like a whimsical vehicle.
ReplyDeleteIn answer to your wondering, I offer the following from a novel by Brian Morton entitled Starting Out in the Evening:
This is what an artist is,
she thought.
This is the temperament you need
to spend a whole day
tinkering with a sentence,
making sure both the meaning
and the music are right;
to spend three
or seven
or ten years
working on a book.
Thanks Dotty! And what a perfect poem in response to my wonderings! Thank you for sharing it.
DeleteIt most certainly does! I see it! Beautiful composition and perfect choice of palette. LOVE this.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Roseanne! I so appreciate your glowing comments! I kind of love it too!
Deletea darling baby truck -- love it!
ReplyDeleteWell that's an interesting observation....I didn't see that....until now. Thanks for chiming in!
DeleteI think it spells ABSOLUTE JOY
ReplyDeleteKathy
Yay! Thanks Kathy...that was my goal!
DeleteYour visual sentence definitely spells joy, enthusiasm and pure happiness! So expressive! Love it, MaryAnn!
ReplyDeleteThanks Judy! I'm glad you see all those things. It was such an interesting and informative way to put a collage together.
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